My Podcast/ talent development

Here s the finished podcast:

Hi Ruby.

Well done on a great writing day! You and Pyper worked extremely hard on the finer details of your podcast today. Adding more details to your backgrounds and scenes has helped to bring out the word pictures your created in your story. Keep up the hard work. I am looking forward to seeing the finished product next week.

Katie.

Story writing update

Today for our story writing we decided out of mine and Pyper's podcast and Pyper didn't like hers so we decided to use mine.

We made really cool pictures for the podcast and next week is our last week to work on it so we have to check that our voices are clear and that all the pictures aren't blurry. We also need to make our credits and on our credits we need to write down where we got the pictures from like the website off google images.

I am so nervous that we won't be finished in time.

Story writing

This week for story writing we have finished our writing and we are starting our garage band, well we got to choose out of garage band or kids pix but we chose garage band.

Here is the story Pyper and I wrote I hope you enjoy it:

Alice and Grace, the most beautiful princess twins in

all the land, were picking flowers from their blooming

garden. Years earlier, the princess twin’s mother had

got extremely sick and eventually died. Their father,

the King, followed the Queens last words which were

to move on and to try to make a big difference in the

world. Eventually their father remarried the most

beautiful woman in all the land (or so he thought). He

did not realise his new wife was an ugly, wicked, self-

centered witch in disguise. All the animals in the

forest, including the princesses best friends, (Spencer

the Bunny, Chicken Little the Chicken and Fred the

Guinea Pig called her Witchy Pooh with a capital W!

The reason they knew she was evil was because she

has tried to kill them so they couldn’t stop her from

taking over the world, but of course that plan hadn’t

quite worked just yet!!!! Every morning Witchy Pooh

would make the King a cup of tea and add a drop of

poison. One morning Witchy Pooh got sick and tired

of the King not getting any sicker, so she put 5 drops

of poison in his tea. Finally she got what she wanted.

He died... Witchy Pooh took over as queen, and as an

evil step mother to the twins. Now that she was in

charge... Witchy Pooh grabbed hold of the

princesses. As they tried to escape she ripped their

dazzling silk dresses. She yanked the girls over to

their beds and ordered her loyal guards to tie the

twins down. The guard grabbed hold of Alice but she

managed to kick him in the stomach. “Get away from

me you chubby fat freak!” yelled Alice. “Hey!” The

guard replied. The guard continued to hold her down

until Witchy Pooh came along and grabbed Alice by

the throat and squeezed her so hard she fainted. Next

Witchy Pooh stormed over to Grace while the guard

was holding her down when

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” Grace

screamed. Witchy Pooh snapped at her, then grabbed

Grace by the throat to make her faint. A few moments

later when Witchy Pooh’s went to leave. . . Spencer,

Chicken little and Fred came charging through the

palace doors. Chicken little pecked at the guards

PANTS until they fell down. The guard was so

embarrassed he ran off. Witchy Pooh received a royal

beating from the twins. Everyone in the land ran off

lead by the Brave Royal twins. The twins started a

new village far away from the old kingdom and they

name it Candyland because of all the candy cane trees

and all the gingerbread houses made by Bill the Baker

who’s belly wobbles like joyful jelly. The royal

princesses became Queens! The town had a big

celebration to crown their Queens. A week later the

most handsome twin princes in the world come

galloping into Candyland on their white Stallions.

They were so captivated by the girls beauty, the

immediately fell in love with them. They invited Grace

and Alice for a ride around the woods with them.

Alice and Grace jumped on the back of the horses.

They went for a ride through the woods where

they got to know each other. On their way

back in to the village the prince’s gathered up all

the people in the village and the prince’s proposed

to the princesses. Alice and Grace felt extremely

blessed. All the animals including Spencer the Bunny,

Chicken Little the Chicken and Fred the Guinea Pig,

were all at their double wedding. Everyone started

singing and chanting, “Long Live The Twin Kings And

Queens.”