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Tuesday, September 6, 2011

Story writing

This week for story writing we have finished our writing and we are starting our garage band, well we got to choose out of garage band or kids pix but we chose garage band.
Here is the story Pyper and I wrote I hope you enjoy it:

Alice and Grace, the most beautiful princess twins in


all the land, were picking flowers from their blooming


garden. Years earlier, the princess twin’s mother had


got extremely sick and eventually died. Their father,


the King, followed the Queens last words which were


to move on and to try to make a big difference in the


world. Eventually their father remarried the most


beautiful woman in all the land (or so he thought). He


did not realise his new wife was an ugly, wicked, self-


centered witch in disguise. All the animals in the


forest, including the princesses best friends, (Spencer


the Bunny, Chicken Little the Chicken and Fred the


Guinea Pig called her Witchy Pooh with a capital W!


The reason they knew she was evil was because she


has tried to kill them so they couldn’t stop her from


taking over the world, but of course that plan hadn’t


quite worked just yet!!!! Every morning Witchy Pooh


would make the King a cup of tea and add a drop of


poison. One morning Witchy Pooh got sick and tired


of the King not getting any sicker, so she put 5 drops


of poison in his tea. Finally she got what she wanted.


He died... Witchy Pooh took over as queen, and as an


evil step mother to the twins. Now that she was in


charge... Witchy Pooh grabbed hold of the


princesses. As they tried to escape she ripped their


dazzling silk dresses. She yanked the girls over to

their beds and ordered her loyal guards to tie the


twins down. The guard grabbed hold of Alice but she


managed to kick him in the stomach. “Get away from


me you chubby fat freak!” yelled Alice. “Hey!” The


guard replied. The guard continued to hold her down


until Witchy Pooh came along and grabbed Alice by


the throat and squeezed her so hard she fainted. Next


Witchy Pooh stormed over to Grace while the guard


was holding her down when

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” Grace


screamed. Witchy Pooh snapped at her, then grabbed


Grace by the throat to make her faint. A few moments


later when Witchy Pooh’s went to leave. . . Spencer,


Chicken little and Fred came charging through the


palace doors. Chicken little pecked at the guards

PANTS until they fell down. The guard was so


embarrassed he ran off. Witchy Pooh received a royal


beating from the twins. Everyone in the land ran off


lead by the Brave Royal twins. The twins started a


new village far away from the old kingdom and they


name it Candyland because of all the candy cane trees


and all the gingerbread houses made by Bill the Baker


who’s belly wobbles like joyful jelly. The royal


princesses became Queens! The town had a big


celebration to crown their Queens. A week later the


most handsome twin princes in the world come


galloping into Candyland on their white Stallions.


They were so captivated by the girls beauty, the


immediately fell in love with them. They invited Grace


and Alice for a ride around the woods with them.


Alice and Grace jumped on the back of the horses.


They went for a ride through the woods where


they got to know each other. On their way


back in to the village the prince’s gathered up all


the people in the village and the prince’s proposed


to the princesses. Alice and Grace felt extremely


blessed. All the animals including Spencer the Bunny,


Chicken Little the Chicken and Fred the Guinea Pig,


were all at their double wedding. Everyone started


singing and chanting, “Long Live The Twin Kings And


Queens.”


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